The Deep End
Once I put my togs on, I was ready. I jumped in, splash. It was cold, but gradually got warmer as my body adjusted to the temperature. I played with my friends and splashed water in their faces, then decided to go deeper. Nothing wrong with that right? As I went deeper, my feet started lifting off from the floor, and I was floating. I found this cool. I went deeper, and found I was unable to get back to my friends; I couldn't swim. I gasped for air as my head was dunking, over and under. I started crying, thinking that this was going to be the end. I was waving my arms around and saw someone backing towards me. I grabbed onto their shoulders and held on tight.
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I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Wednesday, 24 October 2018
Thursday, 18 October 2018
Adding Decimals
To start off the term, I have made a DLO to help you and others add Decimal, fast and easily.
If you follow the steps properly, you'll probably become an ultra math genius. Next time, I should be more creative and add a bit more examples so that it would be easier to follow and understand.
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Maths
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