No Escape☠
A man slumped against a wall in his cabin is fearing for his life. He could hear something trying to break down his door. He doesn’t know what is after him, he doesn’t know why they’re after him. He only knew that he’s D O O M E D.
A Creature with eyes as red as blood, teeth as hard as diamonds, claws as sharp as a knife and a mouth that could swallow a child whole, breaks down the door. It scans the area and the man screams in terror. The monster leaps at the man and the man tries to scream , but he is so scared that his vocal cords stop working. The creature is now attacking the man and he starts to black out, there is no way escape from this creature.
W.A.L.T: Use Show not Tell!
Hi Sione,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your show not tell story because while I was reading there were pops of colour in your text. Something you could do better next time is write more about what you enjoyed about.