Bill the Serial Killer

In school, we had to write a story that had different types of punctuation, such as elipses, speech marks or semi colins.

Bill the Serial Killer

Once there was a man named Bill and he was a real trouble maker, he didn’t just fib; he killed! Bill was a Serial Killer. Bill was merciless when it came to killing, he would torture his victims in any kind of way, physically, emotionally, mentally. He always takes a picture of him with his tortured victims and it always ends the same way… his victim always die, when the police arrive there are no fingerprints on the murder weapon because Bill always wears gloves or sprays off his fingerprints.

But one day Bill made a big mistake! He was just doing his normal thing, slaying a family. He tortured the whole family, especially the dad. When he was done with the rest of the family he killed them right in front of the dad’s eyes, this is one of his methods of emotionally torturing someone. He quickly snapped a photo and put it in his pocket (He uses one of those old cameras that spit out the image once it is taken), and swung a baseball bat at the dad’s head multiple times and left.

But he made a big mistake, he didn’t make sure that the dad was dead. When he left, the picture flew out of his pocket and onto the ground, hours later the dad woke up and saw the picture, he called the cops and they were able to track down Bill. They went to the run down warehouse where Bill lived, “HAND’S IN THE AIR CRIMINAL… Mmmkay!” Bill had finally been captured, he was put to court and sentenced to death by lethal injection.

He got what he deserved!